Hidden in the dark
Craving blood but can’t emerge
Vampires hate the sun
Written for Grammar Ghoul Press Unlucky Thirteen number 1
Good idea, using the Haiku form for the 13 words. Why didn’t I think of that?
Well done. An “Unlucky Thirteen” haiku! Way beyond my technical abilities!
Yes, I agree with the format choice. I saw 13 words, said to myself.. 17 syllables, 13 words.. this is such a done deal. Great haiku.
Well worth a re-blog Joe.
Reblogged this on Same train different track.
Joe, I don’t write poetry at all. But your words convey emotions – ‘hidden, craving, hate the sun’. By the end of the third line I am actually feeling sorry for the poor vampires.
A great Haiku Joe.
What a clever way to complete this challenge (and I’m kind of jealous that I didn’t think of it!). Great job!
Very creative & nicely done!
Hard to feel sorry for vampires, but you made me do it.
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